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What are the different types of novel editing?

16/3/2020

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There are different types of novel editing: developmental editing, line editing, copyediting and proofreading. Revising in the right order is essential if you want your book to be in the best shape possible.
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​Developmental editing

Developmental editing comes first. This is big-picture work that involves looking at the story as a whole.

You’ll also hear it called structural editing, perhaps even content editing, and the base components always include plot, structure, characterization, pace, viewpoint, narrative style, and tense.

  • Plot: This is the sequence of events that take the reader from the beginning to the end.
  • Structure: This determines how the plot is organized. Even if B occurred after A, the reader might learn about B before the events of A are unveiled.
  • Characterization: This is how characters are represented such that we can make sense of their behavior as we journey with them through the story.
  • Pace: Pacing is about the speed at which the story unfolds. Effective pace ensures readers feel neither rushed nor bored. That doesn’t mean the pace remains steady; a story can include sections of fast-paced action and slower cool-downs.
  • Viewpoint: In each chapter or section, readers should understand who the narrator is—whose eyes they are seeing through, whose emotions they have access to, whose voice dominates the narrative. It also means understanding the restrictions in play such that head-hopping doesn’t pull the reader out of the story.
  • Narrative style: Is the narrative viewpoint conveyed in the first, second or third person? The choice determines a narrative’s style.
  • Tense: Is the story told in the present or the past tense? Each has its benefits and limitations.
3 things you should know about developmental editing
  1. There are different types of developmental edits—full-novel edits in which the editor revises (or suggests revisions) that will improve story; critiques or manuscript evaluations that report on the strengths and weaknesses of story; and sensitivity reads that offer specialist reports on the potential misrepresentation and devaluation of marginalized others.
  2. Different editors handle developmental edits in different ways. One might include an assessment of genre and marketability; another might not. Some editors revise the raw text; others restrict the edit to margin markup. Check what you’re being offered against what you want.
  3. Developmental editing isn’t about checking spelling, grammar, and punctuation.
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Line editing
Line editing is the next step in the revision process and it is stylistic work. 

A strong sentence elevates story; a poorly crafted one can bury it. This level of editing revises for style, sense, and flow.

You might also hear line editing referred to as substantive editing or stylistic editing. Editors will be addressing the following:
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  • Authenticity of phrasing and word choice in relation to character voice
  • Character-trait consistency and unveiling
  • Clarity and consistency of viewpoint and narrative style
  • Cliché and awkward metaphor
  • Dialogue and how it conveys voice, mood, and intention
  • Sentence pace and flow, with special attention to repetition and overwriting
  • Tenses, and whether they’re effective and consistent
  • Told versus shown prose
3 things you should know about line editing
  1. There are different types of sentence-level edits—full-novel line edits in which the editor revises (or suggests revisions) that will improve the line work; line critiques that report on the strengths and weaknesses of the line craft; and mini line edits in which the editor revises an agreed section of the novel such that the author can hone their line craft and mimic the edit throughout the rest of the novel.
  2. Different editors define their sentence-level services differently. Some include technical checking (copyediting) with the stylistic work, while some do the stylistic and technical work in separate passes. Check what you’re being offered against what you want.
  3. Line-editing stage is not the ideal place to be fixing problems with plot, theme, pace and viewpoint. Fixes are likely to inelegant and invasive.
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Copyediting
Copyediting is the technical side of sentence-level work. Editors will be addressing the following:
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  • Chapter sequencing
  • Consistency of proper-noun spelling
  • Dialogue tagging and punctuation
  • Letter, word, line, and paragraph spacing
  • Logic of timeline, environment, and character traits
  • Spelling, grammar, syntax, punctuation, hyphenation, and capitalization
  • Standard document formatting
3 things you should know about copyediting
  1. Some editors offer line editing and copyediting together in a single pass. That combined service might be indicated by what it’s called, e.g. ‘line-/copyediting’. However, it might be called just ‘copyediting’ even though it includes stylistic work. Again, check what you’re being offered against what you want.
  2. Novel copyediting is best done in a single pass. When an editor works on separate chunks of text, inconsistencies are likely to slip through.
  3. One pass of a sentence-level edit is not enough to ready a novel for publication. Final quality control is necessary.
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Proofreading
Proofreading is the last stage of the editing process prior to publication. Every novel, whether it’s being delivered in print or digitally, requires a final quality-control check.
A proofreader looks for literal errors and layout problems that slipped through previous rounds of revision or were introduced at design stage.

Authors preparing for print can ask a proofreader to annotate page proofs. These are almost what a reader would see if they pulled the novel off the shelf. Others ask proofreaders to amend the raw text, either because they’re preparing for epublication or for audiobook narration.

Proofreaders are more than typo hunters. They check for consistency of spelling, punctuation and grammar, but also for layout problems such as (but not limited to) indentation, line spacing, inconsistent chapter drops, missing page numbers, and font and heading styles. The remit is extensive (download a free checklist).

The art of good proofreading lies in knowing when to change and when to leave well enough alone. A good proofreader should understand the impact of their revisions—not only in relation to the knock-on effect on other pages but also to the cost if a third-party designer/formatter is part of the team.
3 things you should know about proofreading
  1. A proofread is rarely enough, no matter how experienced the writer. It’s the last line of defense, not the only line of defense.
  2. Be sure to clarify with an editor what you want and which mediums the editor works with. Proofreading designed page proofs requires an additional level of checking that a raw-text review doesn’t. And some editors work only on raw text, some only on PDF, and some only on hard copy.
  3. Proofreading is about quality control. The proofreader should be polishing the manuscript, not filling in plot holes or trimming purple prose.

Which type of editing do you need?
Authors need to take their books through all the types of editing. That doesn’t mean hiring third party professionals for each stage. Writing groups, self-study courses, how-to books, and self-publishing organizations are all great sources of editorial support.

If you decide to work with a professional, invest in one who can help you where you’re weakest. You might be a great structural self-editor but prone to overwriting. Or you might have nailed line craft but need help with story development.

And pay attention to the order of play when it comes to revision. Fixing plot holes at proofreading stage might damage previous rounds of editing. That’s a waste of time and money that every writer wants to avoid!
Louise Harnby is a line editor, copyeditor and proofreader who specializes in working with independent authors of commercial fiction, particularly crime, thriller and mystery writers.

She is an Advanced Professional Member of the Chartered Institute of Editing and Proofreading (CIEP), a member of ACES, a Partner Member of The Alliance of Independent Authors (ALLi), and co-hosts The Editing Podcast.

Visit her business website at Louise Harnby | Fiction Editor & Proofreader, say hello on Twitter at @LouiseHarnby, connect via Facebook and LinkedIn, and check out her books and courses.
2 Comments
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16/3/2020 12:25:02 pm

This is a great overview of editing, Louise. I am wondering if you ever combine a light content edit along with a line edit. Very often I have a writer who has been through content editing with beta readers or a workshop, and a maybe a developmental editor,. Then the writer feels ready for line edits. But when I begin the line editing process, I find some content issues that still need addressing. Any advice on how to edit for content issues and line editing? Would you do content edits separately or working them as you go with the line edits? Because, at the finish, if rewriting scenes is required, then another line edit is often needed to get it all clean, right?

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Louise Harnby
16/3/2020 07:45:40 pm

I help if I can do so reasonably quickly but since I haven’t been paid for the time it takes to do structural work, I’m more likely to flag up problems I notice and get on with the job I’ve been commissioned for. I’m not a developmental editor, and my services are outlined clearly on my website. I’m prepared to go beyond the call of duty on occasion but I’m running a business. I’d rather try to educate potential clients with articles like this so that we don’t end up in that situation in the first place!

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