Learn about dialogue and thoughts in fiction

Hone your writing and editing craft with articles, books, webinars and booklets dedicated to helping you solve problems with dialogue and thoughts.

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Articles about dialogue​ and thoughts in fiction

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Free booklets to help you craft engaging dialogue

How to declutter your dialogue

This booklet offers guidance or writing dialogue that pushes your novel forward rather than making the reader feel like they’re eavesdropping on a mundane conversation at the bus stop.

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How to write dialogue that pops

This booklet offers a framework for how to write dialogue that pops with voice, mood and intention.

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Editing Fiction at Sentence Level

​Hone your novel line craft

Want to do your own line editing? This 74K-word book shows you how.

Andy Maslen, bestselling crime author

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EXACTLY THE TIGHTENING IT NEEDED
​I am so pleased with what you’ve done, Louise. It’s really great – exactly the tightening it needed.

SIMON DANIELS, THRILLER WRITER

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Webinars on dialogue in fiction

Preparing Your Book for Submission

'The BEST event I have been to on how to edit a manuscript. I learned so much!' – ​SoA @ Home Festival​ attendee
This 30-minute webinar teaches commercial fiction authors 11 pithy line-editing tips that make a substantive difference to writing flow and reader experience.

How to punctuate dialogue in a novel

This 20-minute webinar shows fiction writers and editors how to punctuate dialogue in a novel according to publishing-industry convention. 

Want to access the guidance in written form? There's a free booklet too.​​

​Louise talks dialogue with Keystroke Medium

I join the team at Keystroke Medium, The Writer's Journey, and talk about the goals of dialogue in a scene, how to use it to keep story pace on track, how to create unique character voices, and using punctuation, tags, actions beats effectively.

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