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How to Line Edit Fiction: ‘Show, Don’t Tell’

Not sure what exposition in a novel looks like or whether it needs fixing? 

Learn the foundations of ‘show, don’t tell’

This self-paced course introduces beginner and developing fiction editors to shown and told prose.

By the end of the course, you'll understand the following:
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> What ‘show, don’t tell’ means
> Why shown and told prose both have a place in fiction
> Educating authors about ‘show, don’t tell’
> Problematic exposition in narrative
> Problematic exposition in dialogue
> When telling interferes with viewpoint
​> How told prose can enrich reader experience
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​Edit with confidence

​I'll teach you the foundations so you can identify problems, communicate the issues to your clients, and guide them towards solutions.
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Self-paced

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No time restrictions

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The learning process


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Webinars

Watch 7 webinars that prepare you for the practice exercises.
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Workbook

Read the core principles outlined in each module.
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Practice exercises

Test what you've learned by evaluating real examples of fiction.
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Model answers

Compare your work with how I tackled the exercises.
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Resources

Access a suite of useful fiction-editing resources.
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Free ebook

Get a free copy of Making Sense of 'Show, Don't Tell'  worth £8.99.​
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