Learn how to recognize and control narrative distance in a novel using an accessible continuum-based framework.

Confused about narrative distance?

Narrative (or psychic) distance is a complex topic. This course demystifies it. With it, I teach professional fiction editors and commercial fiction authors how to recognize narrative distance, edit with confidence and deliver a better reader experience.

You'll learn about:
> What narrative distance is
> Common narrative styles
> Why authors and editors need to understand distance
> The narrative distance continuum framework
> Frequent problems with distance
> ​Stylistic tools that offer solutions
​PRICE FOR LIFETIME ACCESS: £49.99

20% off training materials

You'll also receive a coupon code that knocks a whopping 20% off the price of my flagship fiction-editing book, its companion collection of guides, and any other courses you fancy!

The course kit

Here's what's included with your lifetime access to the course.

Webinar

40 minutes of line-craft tuition
Learn how to master this complex topic with my accessible visual framework.

Booklet #1

My recommended craft resources
​Get a template and a list of recommended reading resources and software.

Resources

 Quick access to craft tools
Access these links to hone your sentence-level writing and self-editing skills.

Closed captions

Accessible even if you can't hear
​Follow what I'm saying by toggling on the closed captions/subtitles embedded in the webinar.

Transcript

For when you want to read
Download a PDF containing all 76 slides, each with its own word-for-word transcript.

Booklet #2

Conscious language resources
Discover a bank of tools to help you write and edit with representation and respect in mind.

20% discount on all online courses for CIEP members

Log in to Promoted courses · Louise Harnby’s online courses. Then enter the coupon code at my checkout.

What authors and editors are saying about the webinar ...

A live version of this webinar was presented at the Chartered Institute of Editing and Proofreading (CIEP) annual conference in September 2021 and for the Society of Authors in October 2021. Here's what the delegates said ...

Andy Maslen, bestselling crime author

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  • Told me masses of new stuff, and gave me a set of new tools to use immediately.

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Andy Maslen, bestselling crime author

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  • Within a day of Louise’s talk, I’d already applied it to my own work. I can’t wait to see the lightbulbs pop on over my clients’ heads when I explain narrative distance to them.

Katherine Kirk, fiction editor, reviewed on the CIEP blog

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Andy Maslen, bestselling crime author

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  • I'm an experienced line editor and often deal with narrative distance issues, but her visualisation of the five different points of distance really made something click and simplified this complex area. I think that will really help when trying to explain it to some of my authors.

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Andy Maslen, bestselling crime author

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> ​Highly professional, well-structured, excellent simple visuals to break up bullet points, bright clear delivery at a comprehensible speed. Air of calm confidence without being patronising. Society of Authors SoA @ Home Festival (Self-Publishing) attendee

​> It was informative, just the right length and nicely informal. Society of Authors SoA @ Home Festival (Self-Publishing) attendee

> Very practical and well-constructed. Fast (= good) pace. Society of Authors SoA @ Home Festival (Self-Publishing) attendee

> Very experienced and informative speaker. Society of Authors SoA @ Home Festival (Self-Publishing) attendee

> Hadn't realised how the different narrative distances could affect the reader. Her presentation was very clear, with excellent slides, and her enthusiasm for improving texts etc was engaging. Society of Authors SoA @ Home Festival (Self-Publishing) attendee
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> Really useful on the practical and instinctive fronts, and can transfer to construction in non-fiction too. 

> Just totally brilliant. Chartered Institute of Editing and Proofreading (CIEP) 2021 conference attendee

> Absolutely fantastic – as expected! Chartered Institute of Editing and Proofreading (CIEP) 2021 conference attendee

> Fictional editing is not my area, but I will definitely look at every book I read now in a completely different light. Chartered Institute of Editing and Proofreading (CIEP) 2021 conference attendee

​> This was such an insightful [webinar]. So many fiction editing resources are aimed at a lower level, and it was great to listen to some more advanced, specific tips. Chartered Institute of Editing and Proofreading (CIEP) 2021 conference attendee

> The points and approach were very nice and clear. It has also brought some issues to my attention which I do not primarily focus on. It also reminded me of my undergraduate and early post-graduate days when I – sort of – lived for literature and art. Chartered Institute of Editing and Proofreading (CIEP) 2021 conference attendee

> Excellent [webinar]. I loved the examples Louise gave – they really helped to show what she meant by changing narrative distance. It's such an important topic for fiction editors to know about. Chartered Institute of Editing and Proofreading (CIEP) 2021 conference attendee

> ​I got a lot out of this [webinar]. Very clear slides, and good practical examples. I’m grateful for direction that I can use to improve. Thank you! Chartered Institute of Editing and Proofreading (CIEP) 2021 conference attendee

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Listen to audio tasters for 2 of the discounted books

Course pricing and access

How much does it cost?
The price is £49.99 for lifetime access to all the course materials.

​​​CIEP members can get a 20% discount. Log in to Promoted courses · Louise Harnby’s online courses. Then enter the coupon code at my checkout.
What support do you give me?
I'm always happy to help. You can email me for support whenever you want. My contact information is on the course page.
How do I pay?
Just click on one of the green buttons. That'll take you to the order form on my training site hosted by LearnWorlds. From there you can make your payment and enrol immediately.
How do I access the course?
As soon as you've purchased the course, you'll be invited to create a login for my learning portal. That will give you immediate and continuing access to the course materials 24/7.
How do I get the discount coupons?
The 20% discount coupon codes are in the resource booklet included on the course page when you log in.
Does the course come with CIEP membership upgrade points?
Yes, if you're ready to upgrade your CIEP membership, the following courses count towards total training/CPD upgrade points.

>  Narrative Style: Viewpoint, Tense and Voice: 3 points
>  Switching to Fiction: 2 points
>  How to Write the Perfect Fiction Editorial Report: 2 points
>  Narrative Distance: 1 point
>  Branding for Business Growth: 1 point
​>  Blogging for Business Growth: 1 point
>  ​Social Media for Business Growth: 1 point

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