Louise Harnby | Crime Fiction and Thriller Editor
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How to Line Edit for Suspense

Help your authors craft suspenseful prose
that compels readers to stay on the page

Not sure how to fix poorly crafted suspense in fiction?
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Suspense is an opportunity to engage. When it misses the mark, readers lose interest.

​I'll teach you how to fix that.


This course introduces fiction editors and authors to the suspense trifecta – a user-friendly frame of reference that helps you identify suspense points at scene level, evaluate their success and revise with confidence.
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Price


£82.99 (+ tax)

Format


Self-paced

Access


No time restrictions

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The learning process


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Webinar

Watch the video and prepare for the practice exercises.
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21 practice exercises

Test what you've learned by evaluating real examples of fiction.
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21 model answers

Compare your work with how I tackled the exercises.
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Transcript

Deaf students can access closed captions. A PDF transcript of the webinar is also included.
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Book

Includes my bestselling book Editing Fiction at Sentence Level.​
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3-book boxset

Includes the 3-book Fiction Editing Collection.​
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Resources to help you read and learn

In addition to the webinar, this course includes four of my popular fiction-editing ebooks, and a set of 21 practice exercises and model answers.
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The practice exercises went far beyond what I was expecting ...
The suspense trifecta framework is genius. Now I feel confident about assessing suspense and explaining my recommendations to my clients. The practice exercises went far beyond what I was expecting. Such a great course. Thank you for giving me the opportunity to beta test it.
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Who is this course suitable for?​
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Wondering whether this course is for you? I recommend it for anyone who falls into one of the following categories:
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  • Experienced non-fiction editors who want to switch to fiction.
  • Fiction proofreaders who want to expand their skill set and move into line editing.
  • Fiction copyeditors with strong technical skills who want to develop stylistic craft at sentence level.
  • Beginner and developing authors who want to improve their draft-revision skills.
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