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Dialogue Formatting and Display

Hone your fiction-editing skills.

Edit dialogue with confidence

This self-paced course teaches editors, proofreaders and writers how to format and display a novel's dialogue for clarity and reader engagement, and according to publishing convention.
How to Edit Dialogue

Learning outcomes

After completing this course, you'll understand how to:
  • record and communicate formatting decisions
  • lay out dialogue on a page
  • display translated non-English speech
  • display non-English speech
  • format internal dialogue
  • indicate mouthed speech
  • choose the most effective font styling for dialogue
  • show emphasis, volume and doubt in speech
  • check the formatting of contracted forms
  • manage multiple internal snippets of nested speech
  • render spoken numbers for clarity.

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WHAT YOU PAY ...
34.99
+ tax
No time limits on access
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The learning process


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Video tutorial

Watch the video and prepare for the practice exercises.
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Practice exercises

Test what you've learned from the video tutorial.
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Model answers

Compare your work with how I tackled the exercises.
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Transcript booklet

Download a PDF booklet featuring all of the video content.
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Resource list

Discover other tools and resources to help you hone your line craft.
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Closed captions

Deaf students can access a live transcript of the audiovisual content.
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Who is this course suitable for?
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FICTION BEGINNERS
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Beginner fiction line editors, copyeditors and proofreaders who are learning the foundations
FICTION IMPROVERS
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​Intermediate fiction line editors, copyeditors and proofreaders seeking to hone or verify their skills.
SPECIALISM SWITCHERS
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Experienced non-fiction editors who want to switch to fiction.
SELF-EDITING AUTHORS
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​Beginner and emerging novelists who are self-editing a final draft.
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