Learn the foundations of 'show, don't tell'

Not sure what exposition in a novel looks like or whether it needs fixing?

This live online workshop introduces beginner and developing fiction editors to shown and told prose.

​I'll teach you the foundations so you can identify problems, communicate the issues to your clients, and guide them towards solutions.

By the end of the workshop, you'll understand the following:
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> What ‘show, don’t tell’ means
> Why shown and told prose both have a place in fiction
> Educating authors about ‘show, don’t tell’
> Problematic exposition in narrative
> Problematic exposition in dialogue
> When telling interferes with viewpoint
​> How told prose can enrich reader experience

The workshop

The workshop lasts 2 hours and includes:
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  • A pre-course workbook
  • Lifetime access to the workshop videos
  • ​Discussion of core principles
  • Practice exercises and suggested answers
  • Breakout sessions and whole-group discussion

The learning process

This workshop isn't about me talking at you via a lecture. It's an interactive experience that focuses on learning through discussion and practice. That's why in addition to our 2 hours together you'll get lifetime access to additional video content. This will be made available prior to the workshop so you have time to prep.

Videos

Watch the pre-course lectures to prepare for the workshop exercises and discussion.

Workbook

Access summaries of key learning points, practice exercises and links to videos and model answers.

Practice exercises

Test what you've learned about narrative show and tell by evaluating real examples of fiction.

Model answers

Compare your practical work with model examples of how I tackled the exercises.

Resources

Get organized with a suite of useful resources for more productive fiction-editing practice.

A small group

Each workshop is limited to 8 students, ensuring the atmosphere is friendly and comfortable.

Free ebook

Every student gets a free copy of my ebook Making Sense of 'Show, Don't Tell'  worth £8.99.​

Your questions answered

HOW MUCH DOES IT COST?
The price is £59.99 for the 2-hour workshop and access to all the course materials.
are there any goodies?
There are indeed! In addition to the workshop, you'll get a free PDF copy of my guide Making Sense of 'Show, Don't Tell'. 
HOW DO i BOOK?
Register your interest and you'll get advance notice via email when booking opens. Each workshop is limited to 8 students, and places will be given on a first-come-first-served basis.
how will i pay?
When booking opens, I'll email you the link to my store. There will be 8 places, sold on a first-come-first-served basis. 
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Please note that workshop fees are non-refundable.
how will i access the workshop?
The workshop will take place on Zoom. I'll email you with an invitation and password a few days beforehand.
IS THIS WORKSHOP RIGHT FOR ME?
​This workshop is a good fit for anyone who's confused about ‘show, don’t tell’ or who doesn't understand what it means or why it's relevant to the success of a novel. The following people will get the most from it:
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  • Experienced non-fiction editors who want to switch to fiction
  • Fiction proofreaders who want to expand their skill set and move into editing
  • Fiction copyeditors with strong technical skills who want to develop stylistic craft

Experienced stylistic fiction editors will likely already know the topic inside out. Unless you're in need of a foundational brush-up, this workshop isn't a good fit for you.